1. The question you asked after the presentation and how did you feel it was answered (3%).

Quality of the question (provoke critical thinking and generate productive discussion): 10 marks  

Question Asked

“How can healthcare providers ensure that introducing a vending machine for palliative medications does not reduce essential human interaction and emotional support?”

Quality of the Question

My question provoked critical thinking by challenging the assumption that technological efficiency automatically improves healthcare outcomes. Rather than accepting the vending machine concept at face value, it examined potential trade-offs between convenience and essential human elements of palliative care.

The question demonstrated strong analytical qualities by raising ethical concerns about maintaining dignity and compassion during patients’ most vulnerable moments, demanding practical solutions rather than theoretical acknowledgment, and considering multiple stakeholder perspectives, including patients, families, and healthcare providers.

This approach moved the conversation from just focusing on practical advantages to important healthcare values, encouraging meaningful discussions about mixed care models and the overall idea of using technology in delicate medical situations.

How the Question Was Answered

The presenter provided a thoughtful response that demonstrated good understanding of the concerns raised. They acknowledged the importance of maintaining human interaction in palliative care and suggested practical approaches, including implementing vending machines as supplements rather than replacements, ensuring staff availability for consultation, and creating patient check-in protocols and adding a Zoom Call feature.

Their understanding that technology should complement human compassion in palliative care settings rather than take its place was something I found especially admirable. This demonstrated sophisticated understanding of the unique emotional and psychological needs of patients in end-of-life care, moving beyond purely operational considerations to address the fundamental values of healthcare.

How did you feel it was answered:  10 marks

Overall, I felt the answer to the question was thoughtful and comprehensive. The presenter demonstrated a clear understanding of the ethical complexities I raised and showed genuine engagement with the human dimensions of healthcare technology implementation. Their immediate acknowledgment that my concern was valid indicated they had considered these implications during their research, which was reassuring.

The response structure was logical and well-organized. They first addressed the core concern about maintaining human interaction, then provided several practical solutions, including implementing vending machines as supplements rather than replacements, ensuring staff availability for consultation via Zoom call, and creating structured patient check-in protocols. This systematic approach showed they took the question seriously and had thoughtfully considered implementation strategies.

What I particularly appreciated was their recognition that technology should enhance rather than replace human compassion in palliative care settings. This demonstrated sophisticated understanding of the unique emotional and psychological needs of patients in end-of-life care, moving beyond purely operational considerations to address the fundamental values of healthcare.

While their suggested solutions were conceptually sound, I would have greatly appreciated more concrete examples of how similar hybrid models have been successfully implemented in healthcare settings. Their response, while well-intentioned, felt somewhat idealistic without addressing potential barriers to maintaining human interaction alongside automated systems.

Despite these limitations, I felt the presenter genuinely understood the importance of balancing technological efficiency with human-centered care. Their response showed respect for both the complexity of my question and the sensitivity of the palliative care context, which I found professionally appropriate and ethically sound.

2. Feedback (7%)  

Successes: What went well? 10 marks  

The presentation outlined several areas where it was particularly effective in audience engagement and in communicating its message.

One of the main points of the presentation that impressed us was how the presenter cleverly picked concrete, relevant examples, which helped the audience to easily understand complicated ideas. The presenter gave practical examples that illustrated the use of the various business strategies. Such examples became the links connecting the abstract ideas and the practical understanding of the issues; thus, the new information was more memorable and deeper in impact.

The presentation’s personal elements inclusion has surely given more room for the authenticity and emotional connection to the presentation. The presenter generated a more engaging and humanized delivery by giving personal examples, sharing their experiences, and relating the topic of the presentation to their lives. Furthermore, this personal touch created a positive effect on credibility and relatability; the audience got more into the content. It indicated that the presenter was not merely giving academic material, but they had a deep engagement with their subject matter.

The presentation was well forwarded by solid testimonies that reinforced the trust of their case. I could relate to this idea’s benefit, as during my recent visit to the hospital, I spent many hours and had to rush to work after, but I needed to first go to the pharmacy for my medication. The scalability of the vending machine to the hospital facility would benefit many, as it would make it more accessible to get the medicine and save time from the pharmacy run.

The speaker effectively demonstrated the integration of research results, statistical data from experiments, and empirical support throughout their presentation, indicating thorough preparation and academic rigour. This evidence-based way confirmed their arguments and gave the audience confidence in the reliability of the presented information. What made the evidence so convincing was the way it was naturally integrated into the story. Instead of just stating facts or numbers, the presenters cleverly deployed the evidence to support the main ideas at the right times, thus forming a clear and convincing line of reasoning.

Good examples, personal engagement, and solid evidence were combined in a presentation that effectively connected with the audience on several levels—intellectually through the evidence, emotionally through personal elements, and practically through concrete examples. This multi-dimensional approach not only demonstrated sophisticated presentation skills but also showed an effective communication strategy.

Challenges: What didn’t go so well? 10 marks  

Reflecting on the presentation, it was exceptionally well-delivered with only a few minor areas for improvement. The speakers exhibited wonderful preparation, excellent presentation, and in-depth content coverage such that there was nothing much left to significant criticism.
While the presentation was
, overall, excellent, there is always scope for improvement in any academic presentation. Such mastery of delivery, presentation of content, and emotive appeal to the audience ensured that any challenge was relatively minor and failed to detract from the presentation’s overall success.
The presentation was logical and convincing due to its effectiveness in using examples, personal significance, and evidence-based arguments. The presenters successfully avoided problems such as technical glitchestime constraints, or disorganization concerning content organization. The presenters’ professionalism and thorough preparation were evident throughout; however, they could have made the presentation format more engaging.

The presentation 
was a perfect demonstration of excellent scholarly communication. The combination of excellent example selection, authentic personal interest, and strong research support made the presentation engaging and informative. The presenters demonstrated excellent presentation skills and scholarship of the topic by engaging the audience without sacrificing scholarly integrity.
The absence of any genuine challenges indicates the quality of the presentation and preparation, implying that the presenters should have had a quality plan in place and executed their desired strategy well.

Opportunities for Growth: What can be done to improve? (provide clear and feasible suggestions for improvement) 30 marks 

While the presentation was highly effective, there are several strategic opportunities for enhancement that could elevate it from excellent to exceptional, particularly in an academic health context.
The 15-minute format provides an excellent opportunity to integrate brief interactive elements that could deepen audience engagement. For health topics, this could include discussions of case studies or analyses of ethical dilemmas that are directly related to the content, which can be added to the presentation
For health presentations, questions like “How many have encountered this health issue in their family?” or “What do you think is the primary barrier to implementing this intervention?” could create immediate relevance and engagement by using Zoom chats and emoticons.

While the evidence base was strong, incorporating a timeline for research findings (within the last 6–12 months) could demonstrate cutting-edge knowledge. Health fields evolve rapidly, and showcasing awareness of emerging trends, ongoing clinical trials, or recent policy changes would elevate academic credibility.
Health topics inherently connect to multiple disciplines—psychology, sociology, economics, technology, and policy. Explicitly drawing these connections could provide richer context and demonstrate sophisticated understanding of health as a complex, multifaceted field.
Expanding beyond local or Western perspectives to include global health viewpoints, cultural considerations, and health equity issues could add depth and demonstrate awareness of health disparities and cultural competency; however, while the USA example was considered, incorporating an additional viewpoint or experience would have been beneficial.

Although the integration of evidence was commendable, it would be beneficial to employ more advanced data visualization techniques. Interactive charts, infographics, or animated sequences could make complex health data more accessible and memorable. Tools like Canva, Prezi, or even simple PowerPoint animations could enhance the visual appeal of the presentation without overwhelming the content.

 While content was satisfactorygetting slides to conform to professional design principles—consistent fonts, appropriate color schemes, ample white space, and good-quality images—would lend credibility and assist in maintaining the audience‘s attention throughout the 15-minute duration.
More robust transitional declarations between sections would facilitate flow and allow the audience to more easily track the logical progression of ideas. Clear signposting (“Now that we’ve examined the problem, let’s discuss solutions”) focuses audience attention effectively.

Presenter can tailor their presentations to achieve professional conference-level proficiency. 
Exploration of new presentation technologies like augmented reality for anatomical presentations, virtual reality for patient experience simulation, or AI-powered presentation software can place the presenter at the forefront of educational innovation, which was used in the vending machine but can be amplified with more features.
Developing
the abilities to not just deliver information but actually teach concepts to peers might enhance both individual learning and audience learning outcomes. Such activities might include providing supplemental materials, creating study guides, or facilitating follow-up discussion groups.


These areas for development build upon the strengths of the presentation while pushing towards even higher levels of academic and professional excellence in health communication.